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dmitria dance by ~brevity:iconbrevity:

Categories Photography > Darkroom

©2003-2009 ~brevity
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i'm not very happy with these, so i'm looking for helpful criticisms. helpful being the keyword.

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~chinpau Jan 16, 2003, 3:00:15 PM
If I knew what you were trying to achieve it might be easier to give helpful hints... :) (Smile)

The colors and light are good, the model has a good figure and interesting outfit, the setting seems bland, the intention/theme/objective/story is unclear (to me).

:) (Smile)

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~stradero Jan 16, 2003, 3:08:26 PM
Very sexy... :P (Lick)

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~buffetassassin Jan 16, 2003, 4:11:21 PM
I told you these were good. Very nice. :D (Big Grin) I disagree with ~chinpau I believe the story seems clear from the title and images. The setting may be bland but the setting is not the focus of the peice. If the background was too exciting it would take away from the subjects.

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~xmithras Jan 17, 2003, 1:45:27 AM
The model used is very beautiful

I love how it's split into a trio of scenes.

Overall pretty spiffy.
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~dandellion Jan 18, 2003, 8:59:48 PM
well.... maybe....
do something with light... some shadows, some highlighting, give some dark areas....
do something with colors... make a contrast with b/g or something

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~rustajb Jan 20, 2003, 2:30:26 PM
this is really beautiful. I won't ruin it with too much technical critiquing. This "moment in time" idea is so appealing. Yes the model is beautiful, as is the cat. But the smooth transition of the girl, into a connection with the cat, and then to a blurred figure the cat watches.... it speaks to my subconscious in symbols my ego can't quamtify. I love it! It's quite beautiful on more than just the surface.

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~lemut Jan 22, 2003, 6:45:04 AM
i dunno about you, but for me this serie is great, natural, perfect lightning, color tones, saturation, etc..

quite interesting subject and movement.

congrats.

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~blackcat Jan 22, 2003, 8:28:50 AM
very nice sequence... i like how in the first shot the cat is blurry..in the last the girl is blurry.. in the center they are both in focus...

and there is a black cat Giggle

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~zimo Jan 23, 2003, 1:11:33 AM
I like very much those shots... the colors and ambience.. a little bit sexy and harmonious (harmonious? I think!..)
Anyway good pic!

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